POISON!!
Poison!!
The poem describes the hazards of smoking, drinking and even doping...in an unique way.....(hey, i deserve an award from the health ministry for this conribution to their no smoking/no drinking campaign)
The poem describes the hazards of smoking, drinking and even doping...in an unique way.....(hey, i deserve an award from the health ministry for this conribution to their no smoking/no drinking campaign)
I never seem to understand why people smoke,
It's a poison that ruins a fine, young bloke.
Why do i see people dope,
They say, their life's a waste;
There's no hope for survival,
It's a poison that ruins a fine, young bloke.
Why do i see people dope,
They say, their life's a waste;
There's no hope for survival,
But by doping, would there be a revival.
Why do i see people drowned,
In the vast oceans of alcohol,
Why is it that that they can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
I never seem to understand,
Why is it, that the countless pressures that they can't withstand.
Why are they in so much of distress,
Why do they need a cigarette to relieve this stress.
Some think, drinking or doping is cool,
When will they realize they are nothing but a fool.
Why do people drink to forget their sorrow,
Why can't they just work harder for a better tomorrow.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
I never seem to understand why people smoke,
It's a poison that ruins a fine, young bloke.
Why, in parties, do they need a drink in their hand,
Is it elixir coming out from a magic wand.
It all began in the late teens; it continues even now,
Some say, by smoking, you can stay awake till late.
But all these myths are nothing but fake.
Why do you need booze or dope,
To make your life interesting.
Do you wish to be hospitalized so young,
Why is it that you are screwing your liver and lung.
Why at the mention of failure you seem to quiver,
Why do you need so often a can of beer.
Why can't you let go of your frustration,
Why do you crave for coccaine, at its slightest mention.
Why do you need a poison to calm you down,
Why do you need an ocean of alcohol to drown.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
Do you ever see your loved ones' tears,
Pleading you to stop, for the better.
But all their goodwill seems to falter,
As another round of drinks is poured at the platter.
Some try hard to break this habit,
But most just can't get enough of it.
Why can't one say no to smoking,
Also to drinking and doping,
Without them,Is life less worth living....
Why do people need a booze or light,
To make their life interesting.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.
Why can't one say no to smoking,
Also to drinking and doping,
Without them, is life less worth living........
Why do i see people drowned,
In the vast oceans of alcohol,
Why is it that that they can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
I never seem to understand,
Why is it, that the countless pressures that they can't withstand.
Why are they in so much of distress,
Why do they need a cigarette to relieve this stress.
Some think, drinking or doping is cool,
When will they realize they are nothing but a fool.
Why do people drink to forget their sorrow,
Why can't they just work harder for a better tomorrow.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
I never seem to understand why people smoke,
It's a poison that ruins a fine, young bloke.
Why, in parties, do they need a drink in their hand,
Is it elixir coming out from a magic wand.
It all began in the late teens; it continues even now,
Some say, by smoking, you can stay awake till late.
But all these myths are nothing but fake.
Why do you need booze or dope,
To make your life interesting.
Do you wish to be hospitalized so young,
Why is it that you are screwing your liver and lung.
Why at the mention of failure you seem to quiver,
Why do you need so often a can of beer.
Why can't you let go of your frustration,
Why do you crave for coccaine, at its slightest mention.
Why do you need a poison to calm you down,
Why do you need an ocean of alcohol to drown.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.....
Do you ever see your loved ones' tears,
Pleading you to stop, for the better.
But all their goodwill seems to falter,
As another round of drinks is poured at the platter.
Some try hard to break this habit,
But most just can't get enough of it.
Why can't one say no to smoking,
Also to drinking and doping,
Without them,Is life less worth living....
Why do people need a booze or light,
To make their life interesting.
Why is it that people can't stand a fall,
When will they end it all.
Why can't one say no to smoking,
Also to drinking and doping,
Without them, is life less worth living........
Reading ur blog has been
ReplyDeleteAs enjoyable an experience as can be
Fresh and straight-forward is your poetry style
Never knew there were such die-hard poets in Aamchi Aai!
Keep it coming! ESE or no ESE.
Tanvi P
thanks a lot...
ReplyDeletei feel,writing a new post on the blog is a far better thing to do than study for EST....
hi ninad...u said we don't knw each other...we r fellow bloggers in blofpot.com and share the same love and passion for blogging.don't u think that's more than enough to know?
ReplyDeletethanx for dropping by my site...i really liked ur comment! thanx a million!!
nice poem...i like the way u ryhme the words at the end...the rhymes don't seem deliberate also.
i have always admired poets. i can write prose but poems seem so difficult to me.
ur poem is an eye-opener to many boozers.
the poem is both entertaining yet informative.
thnx once again...and yea, we are fellow bloggers....if u come across any nice blogs that are worth reading..kindly send me their link too...
ReplyDeleteand poems aren't that difficult to write...give it a try!!..i'm sure u can do it!!
Really Neat..Great work..
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